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Does this story beginning sound okay?

Wednesday, November 25th, 2009

XxXxJoeJonas4everXxXx asked: My heart raced a thousand time faster as I heard last period bell ring. I jumped up from my seat, anxious to see him. I dashed out of Mr. Raymond’s biology 1 class and to the, now overly-packed, hallway. My eyes lurked around, searching for him. No sign. ...

Anyone Wanna read my fantasy story?.Chapter 1?

Tuesday, November 24th, 2009

Matt d asked: As the birds sing and the trees flowed in the wind, a boy ventured out hunting with his father on his 17th birthday. “Father what’s the matter? Can’t you keep up?” He chuckled, “Your getting to old father! Ha-ha” He shouted, panting slightly. “I may be old Alakai ...

These are the first 2 chapters of my book. Please read and comment it. Bye the way I need help how to continue

Monday, October 12th, 2009

ante.zepina asked: 1 Grey clouds covered the skies above Lanster that early morning. The only thing to be heard was the the whistling of the wind as it swept away the last leaves. Fall had arrived with a swift breeze and for Daxter that meant the best. Daxter was a small, shy ...

Im writing a Fantasy story, can you review it?

Saturday, October 10th, 2009

Matt d asked: Im 17 and kinda new at the whole book writing thing so heres my story =] Prologue It was a dark, cold time in the land of Fallacre…once a bright beautiful land full of animals and humans alike; it was now evil and decaying. Long ago in Fallacre ...

please read my story =]?

Saturday, October 3rd, 2009

Matt d asked: Chapter 1 As the birds sing and the trees flowed in the wind, He ventured out hunting with his father on his 17th birthday. “Father what’s the matter? Can’t you keep up?” He chuckled, “Your getting to old father! Ha-ha” He shouted, panting slightly. “I may be old Alakai ...

Does this story beginning sound okay?

Friday, August 14th, 2009

XxXxJoeJonas4everXxXx asked: My heart raced a thousand time faster as I heard last period bell ring. I jumped up from my seat, anxious to see him. I dashed out of Mr. Raymond’s biology 1 class and to the, now overly-packed, hallway. My eyes lurked around, searching for him. No sign. ...

I have wrote nearly half a book, please comment, looking for critics?

Monday, July 13th, 2009

sweet_Scarlet asked: here are a few paragraphs of my story, im 13 and this is only a draft which i have'nt really gone over, its basically about these siblings who have these wierd gifts that they dont know much about, no ones read all of it so if you think ...

Anyone wanna read my story?

Wednesday, July 8th, 2009

Matt d asked: Now im only 17 and kinda new at writing but i had the sudden urge to write a book and well here it is. feel free to make or change anything thats wrong and give me some ideas of what u would like to see happen =] Chapter 1 Our ...

Okay, I just wrote two short storys for my English class and i was wondering which one should I use?

Monday, June 29th, 2009

SillyKitKat asked: Ok, I really need help on this, it's due tomarrow. Heres the first one... Thunder was booming across the empty ally street as stray dogs scuttled accross to the saftey from the rain to their garbage cans. Every once in a while people would walk by either ...

Who would like to review a fantasy book im writing?

Sunday, May 24th, 2009

Matt d asked: Now im only 17 and kinda new at writing but i had the sudden urge to write a book and well here it is. feel free to make or change anything thats wrong and give me some ideas of what u would like to see happen =] Chapter 1 Our ...