Archive for the ‘Other - Arts & Humanities’ Category

critique-proffesional writers/publishers preferred!opinion still matters if not:Dthanks?

Friday, December 18th, 2009

ihartstewie! asked: I slowly walked towards the small wooden door. My small Mary Janes made little or no sound as I neared closer. My mother had just told me to feed her, and I was doing so, for she would never do it herself. As I reached for the glass ...

critique- am i a good writer-please dont include spelling errors-i no i have lots-ill edit it later!:D?

Friday, December 4th, 2009

ihartstewie! asked: I slowly walked towards the small wooden door. My small Mary Janes made little or no sound as I neared closer. My mother had just told me to feed her, and I was doing so, for she would never do it herself. As I reached for the glass ...

Will someone?

Wednesday, April 22nd, 2009

d_asnightnday asked: read my paper? Have you ever had life as you know it completely changed, just in matter of seconds? Well I sure have, my life was turned upside down and sideways when I found out, just about two weeks ago that my little sister Samantha had type one juvenile ...

Would you consider this to be a satire about stupid lawsuits? Sorry the spacing is a little messed up?

Wednesday, February 11th, 2009

Paige L asked: ‘Splash’ a huge wall of water ascended in the air after Wyatt swung off of a vine hanging from an ancient oak tree. The Doty children were playing in a river not far from their home. “Cut it out,” Cara demanded as ...